Remembering a Time on a Sunnie Day
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Remembering a time,
When there was just you and me.
Bare foot and gentle breezes,
Calling us to play,
Amongst, fields of gold.
No other thoughts,
In this world,
We had created.
Only the sweet kisses,
That lay upon our lips,
Silencing the world outside,
Hearing only the sounds,
Of our two hearts beating.
Love was born that early summer.
Feelings gracefully rested,
Upon our hearts,
Causing two young lovers,
To dance in the fields of gold.
Lying in the grass so sweet,
Fingers,
Playfully, touching,
Senses awaken to each kiss.
In your eyes, I saw forever,
As the sun,
Magically,
Caressed our souls,
Causing feelings,
We have never felt before.
Please remember me,
When you walk through the fields of gold.
Feel my touch in the gentle wind,
Hear my laughter,
As it sings through the trees,
Like a sweet lullaby.
Never forgetting our love,
Forever written,
On the pages,
Of my heart.
Sunnie Day
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Sunnie this is absolutely beautiful;.. the song is so soothing and romantic.. You did a great job on this.. wow.. what can I say..
voted way up
Debbie
Hi Mary,
Isnt that song awesome? I love it so much. Thank you my friend for coming by. I hope you have a wonderful night.
Hugs,
Sunnie
Beautiful poem, beautiful photo, beautiful music! What more can I say? I voted this UP, etc.etc.
Thank you so much Delores,
So kind..Happy you came by.
Sunnie
Such a beautiful poem, Sunnie. And Eva Cassidy's rendition of Fields of Gold is the best, an excellent singer, like an angel. The sweetness of your poem reflected the tone of the song so well.
Thank you htodd for reading some of my hubs tonight. I appreciate it very much..Take care,
Sunnie
Nice poem..Thanks a lot
Hello Sue,
Thank you my wonderful friend..Hopeing you have a beautiful day.
Hugs,
Sunnie
Hi Sunnie
Walking through the fields of gold. Breathtaking beautiful and poignant.
Voted up and away!
Thanks Eddy, have a great day too..Thank you for stopping by.
Love,
Sunnie
So very beautiful Sunnie as always told in your own sweet and caring style.
The song one of my favourites too.
I have to award the up up and away.
Take care my dear friend and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
Thank you Minnie and Lesly,
I love that song too..just makes you feel all warm inside and takes us back to a time..Have a beautiful day.
Love,
Sunnie
Eva Cassidy and fields of gold one of my favourite artists and songs, perfect with your beautiful poem of love.
Voting up and awesome!
Dear Sunnie-You just uplifted my day with this beautiful poem about love. You picked the perfect song to go with this poem.
Hello Martie,
I could never live with a racist either..the love would grow cold very fast! Sad though isn't it that as sweet a man as he may have been, he could not move beyond the prejudice...I hope you have a wonderful night with sweet dreams.Thank you for coming by..
Hugs,
Sunnie
Sunnie
Sweet love... Philia... friendship and sharing rule. I experienced this kind of love 10 years ago with an extra-ordinary soft-hearted man. But my love for him slowly died during the 2 years we were together, because he was a racists and I could not accommodate his remarks towards the non-whites in our country. One day I simply exploded and left him. And to think he considered himself a Christian. So yes, Sunnie, I identify with you in this poem, but with sadness because it is just another 'could have been' in my life.
It is almost 3am - Maybe I should rather call it a day. Take care!
Thank you Ruby..so happy to see you..I am glad you enjoyed this one..Have a great evening.Hugs!
Sunnie
Beautiful Sunnie..Remembering love..Wonderful..The song is perfect!!
Hi Linda,
So glad to see you! It has been awhile..I hope your holidays were great! Thanks so much for reading..I do so love that song too..it stirs the heart..tears may come and one may have no idea why...I hope it stired your heart to a wonderful time.
Hugs,
Sunnie
Thank you Frog so much! I stopped by to see you the other day!:)
Have a great day!
Sunnie
This is a beautiful version of the song - I usually can't hear it without feeling a lump in my throat. And just the words alone, 'fields of gold' give me such a thrill, I'm not surprised you were so inspired.
I love what you've done with these feelings and memories. I ain't 'zac'ly one those who's good at analysing poetry, but this one moved me enough to tell you that I liked it :) I think we all have some memories like this, though we can't all put them into such beautiful verse as this. I have dreams like this, very often - sometimes of memories, and sometimes brand new. Your poem has brought a few of them back to the surface - lovely, thank you.
Linda.
SD - You are absolutely marvelous my dear.
The song sets the mood to read this beautiful piece.
The Frog
Thank you Suzie, August, and Jenu,
Happy you stopped by today and enjoyed the hub. Have a blessed day,
Sunnie
A beautiful poem from a beautiful writer! :)
Beautiful poem ignited by sweet memories.
The nostalgia of new found love. Such a wonderful and well written poem. It reminds me of an innocence of two people who fondly adore one another.
Hello Rosemary,
Good morning..Thank you for stopping by..I am doing some reading this morning..hopefully to catch up :)..Hope you have a great day.
Love,
Sunnie
Beautiful Sunnie, tender and touching and teamed with the perfect song.
UpA & B
Dear Ghaelach
What a sweet and beautiful commment Thank you! I was walking yesterday morning and this song came on. I love this version most of all. She is so talented and like Karen Carpenter..left us way too soon..
Hugs,
Sunnie
Hello Bob,
ahhh...I didnt know your mom was nicknamed Sunnie. I will think about that everytime you post. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a beautiful day,
Sunnie
Hello Mike,
Those traces come up when you least expect it..I am sure with Valentines fast appoaching they will meet you at every turn. That is my hope anyway. I listened to that song a dozen times and still want to hear it again. Closing my eyes takes me back too..
Thank you for stopping by..
Hugs,
Sunnie
Morning Sunnie.
Lovely poem.
I have only heard "Sting" sing Fields Of Gold untill now. This is a beautiful version of a beautiful song from a beautiful woman taken away at such a young age of 33 years.
I'm sure that she is looking down and reading your wonderful poem and saying thank you Sunnie.
Take care and have a nice day.
LOL Ghaelach
Another ray of warmth and love from our lovely Sunnie.
PS My mother's nickname was Sunnie
Bob
Hello Sunnie. This poetry is like a time machine for me. Just a trace of memory of these lost times remain. The eyes are gone and the ink has faded - oh, sorry, just limbering up for Valentines.
Thank you so much Mar, So happy you enjoyed this one. Wishing you a beautiful night
Sunnie
Dear Sunnie,
This song was indeed the perfect inspiration for a subject that you expressed with purity, tenderness and perfection.
Just lovely- voted UP & AB. Hugs, Maria
Thank you Brett. She makes this song..thank you for taking time to read..
Take care,
Sunnie
Lovely. I also love Eva Cassidy .... Voted up!
Thank you Gail..was kind of in a dream land as I walked..lol
Thanks for reading,
Have a great night,
Sunnie
Ah....what a lovely treat this poem and the accompanying photos are.
You also chose the perfect song for this hub.
Voted up, useful, awesome and beautiful.
Thank you Ken, As I took my morning walk, this song came on and I have not heard it for years. It brought such sweet thoughts to my mind. I loved your comment so kind and beautiful.
Love,
Sunnie
Simply beautiful with memories divine. Among the fields of gold indeed, two hearts wanting to stay forever and making those sweet promises to each other. When two can keep those promises made, they have a chance of staying together until the end like the movie."Notebook" how we all wish for that. Voted up and heart wrenching, thank you for this wonderful hub, loved the video, it fit perfectly. Hugs xo
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Hi Debbie,
Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed this one. Have a wonderful night!
Hugs,
Sunnie